I totally forgot to reply to this.
Beautiful model, very well made. I love the fact you're good at this and there are no technical flaws in it. The polycount might be slightly generous, but I wouldn't worry. It's always nice to see quality models in here, so it's a crime against everything that I stand for that I didn't respond earlier. -Especially when this is a reply to my direct hint to show something. It's incredibly rude of me. So here's me correcting this.
You asked or mentioned criticism? Not that I have objectively anything against it, the design is recognizable/typical to Czalkir and elegant, you made your own alien race with its own design philosophy and that's nowhere as easy as many might think. But if I was forced to point out a couple of things? This would be the list:
- Honestly I never knew where the cockpit is...
- The Tag Fighter right? So it is supposed to be fragile. But maybe all the gaps dividing the engine block into three sections and the weaker neck between the engines and the body is a bit too much? A typical Homeworld ship is ugly sturdy, as in utility first, sleek design later. Same reason I rebuilt my Artillery Frigate from that anime thing into a solid ship. I understand this is an alien race, so the exception to the rule is obvious. But still, a couple of tiny touches would improve structural integrity by 200% and the ship would overall look the same.
- I don't know your texturing plans, but the original Czalkir always felt too colorful to me, too saturated. Slightly cartoonish even. This time around I would add some solid metal in the construction and couple patches of worn out paint.