Hmm Joltz’s version though doesn’t go for Short Fuse which is fine because like with my Bear build, he was hopping onto the Dakka Bear turret in the footage anyway. But it seems like you are aiming for a true hybrid style approach with Moze getting in on the action with her guns.
I also noticed that he was a bit vague about his description of Fire in the Skag Den - he mentioned the Mayhem scaling, but did not clarify that it only applies to Moze’s splash damage, whereas it actually works as stated on the card regarding Iron Bear’s splash damage. Unless that was changed at some point or I’ve got the maths wrong? And he also said that Desperate Measures only works in giving Bear more damage if his armour is low when last I was aware, it was contingent only on Moze’s missing health. Otherwise yeah, it’s pretty much standard for a level 65 Bear pilot build; you can get max investment in all the main DPS skills, and you technically didn’t need 5 points in Vampyr before the Plus Ultra even existed.